菓林梓瑄英語自我介紹

大家好
我的名字是呂梓瑄，
我今年10 歲，
我的學校是菓林國小，
興趣是打電腦和聽音樂，
我有一個姊姊和弟弟，
謝謝大家。

Hello everybody.
My name is Shirley，
I am 10 years old.
I study in Guolin Primary School.
My hobbies are playing computer, and listening music.
I have one sister and one brother，
Thank you everybody.

建議:
Hello, everybody.
My name is Shirley.
I am 10 years old.
I study in Guolin Primary School.
My hobbies are playing computer and listening to music.
I have a sister and a brother.
Thank you, everybody.